Monday, November 29, 2010
The Wolves Comments - Sandy & Mon
Nice job with the music and the SFX and the timing of the storyboard panels. Clouds moving in over the beautiful sunset would have been a more natural transition and do an effective job communicating the coming danger of the night. The grows nicely with the conversation in the tent. It would be good to stay inside the tent for the initial wolf howling. That would keep the viewers in contact with girls and the drama that is building. A really great story with a great ending. This would make a great honors project or something in the future. It could be a really good adult animation. You have a great twist and then she faces her guilt and chooses the cowards way out.
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