The Journey Comments - Ka Hei & Kevin

You have created a very interesting story.  The photograph is an interesting device to use to get the boy to follow the man to the front of the train.  The end of the story did leave with a few questions: did the boy jump off of the train before it crashed and that is why his grandma then walks up to him?  or does he just survive the crash?  You probably need some more duration between the crash and the boy meeting his grandmother.  There should definitely be some more shots there.  It might be interesting if the people on the train or people at the crash site think the boy is the bad guy.  What did happen to the bad guy?  Did he jump or die?