Snow White Comments - Cuttle & Vicky

The story gets a little aggressive but it is an interesting turn on the traditional story.  I guess the underwater castle has breathable air inside (I am always worried about the scientific reality of a story environment)  If you are going to have horns sprout from  her head then you should do it on both sides.  That way audience members will know exactly what is going on and the way she is changing from the Snow White most people know.  The story works visually but I got a bit lost in the "this is my new invention" portion of the storyboard.  Another thing is the use of X in the eyes of the fish.  This may be something that is used in anime but from my experience X in the eyes of an animal means that the animal is dead.  If the fish is dead then I find this part a bit confusing.